My thoughts on kayaking
Last week we went to draw a kayak, this is the first time in my life kayaking, I think this is something very memorable. That the sun particularly large, it is drying, we have painted a sunscreen,Wore a life jacket. To be honest, this is my first time to feel small to large draw my own boat in fast forward.Thanks to the teacher's guide. Although the weather was very hot, but we are not complaining about the hot weather, more is very much enjoy the fun. When we feel tired we will sing a song,and We took lots of photos. Along the way we also see many small duck on the water in the leisure, they looked very happy.Most exciting is that we also see swans. This is really the first time I saw swans. I am very grateful to teachers and schools to provide this valuable opportunity . of course,we should also thank the drivers for taking us there.
This is a great post! You tell the details of the story in order, and I know exactly what happened. I have some suggestions for your writing:
ReplyDelete1. When you say "draw" a kayak, I think the verb you want is PADDLE. Paddle means to make the boat move through the water.
2. "Thanks to the teacher's guide" is a sentence fragment. A complete sentence would be: Thanks to the teacher's guidance, I learned how to paddle the kayak.
In your photo, you look like a movie star! Grade 100% = A
I like kayaking, too. I also think the ducks and the swans are beautiful. I will tell this experience to my friends.
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